Commercials of the Super Bowl.
Currently the super bowl was on and I had family over to watch it. Now my wife and I are big football fans along with my Dad and brothers. My mother, well not as much as matter of fact if football ended forever she would be happy. On the other hand, when everyone else in the house gets up to get a beer during the commercials, she watches because everyone puts their best foot forward on game day.
We all watch them and laugh but most of the time we just do not remember them. The companies use the valuable air time to try to make us remember. This year, I do remember one. Now as we all know the commercials are there to try to get us to remember their product one way or another and hopefully we buy them. They use different way to reach our emotions but the one that caught me was the Dodge commercial. They got to my heart strings by using emotional pictures and tone. It grab your attention and held it and then at the end they told you about the truck. It started out as documentary sounding and rolled right into a commercial.
Will I go out and buy a dodge, no but I do remember the commercial. One day I hoping I can write as well as the ad did in bring out the emotions out in my readers.
Dave--Your blog is coming along. Your writing flows fairly well, and you sound authentic. Keep working on developing your content to create significance for your reader. Make sure your audience knows why/how your entries are important to them. Expand. Keep working on your visual appeal as well. Images, videos and links as well as text formatting and layout all play a role in the engagement of the reader. The red text is rough on the eyes. Keep it up.
ReplyDeleteUnfortunately, Dave, you have not written any new entries since the first grading period. Your blog project is ongoing for the entire semester. You are missing Assigned Entry #2 and #3, and two self-generated for this grading period. Not good. Start at Assigned Entry #4 now.
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